Feedback and improvements from draft

So after receiving feedback from Jools about the first draft, these are the changes that need to be made.

  • The structure needs to be changed
  • clean up long pauses
  • get rid of the white background wipe transition
  • Bring the bottle back at the end and have the logo curved around the bottle.
  • Delivery of the voice needed to be changed.

So this was the next stage of the  video.

  • So I added the body section to the start of the video.
  • Bought back the bottle at the end of the video and made the label curve around.
  • Re-recorded the voice over.
  • I got ride of the white background swipe transition.

 

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