So after receiving feedback from Jools about the first draft, these are the changes that need to be made.
- The structure needs to be changed
- clean up long pauses
- get rid of the white background wipe transition
- Bring the bottle back at the end and have the logo curved around the bottle.
- Delivery of the voice needed to be changed.
So this was the next stage of the video.
- So I added the body section to the start of the video.
- Bought back the bottle at the end of the video and made the label curve around.
- Re-recorded the voice over.
- I got ride of the white background swipe transition.